Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-leiba-netmod-regpolicy-update-01

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 14 December 2015 16:28 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
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This looks good to me. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan


> -----Original Message-----
> From: barryleiba@gmail.com [mailto:barryleiba@gmail.com] On Behalf Of
> Barry Leiba
> Sent: Monday, December 14, 2015 6:26 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Cc: General Area Review Team; draft-leiba-netmod-regpolicy-
> update.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART Review of draft-leiba-netmod-regpolicy-update-01
> 
> > I am fine with this approach but this is not what the text of the
> 'motivational' part of the Internet-Draft says. Currently there is an a-
> synchronism between the text that explains what the I-D tries to do and the
> action it recommends.
> 
> OK, well, you know I'm always in favour of more clarity.  So how does this
> sound?:
> 
> OLD
>    This document changes that
>    registration policy to "IETF Review", which also allows registrations
>    from certain well reviewed Experimental RFCs.
> 
> NEW
>    This document changes that
>    registration policy to "IETF Review", which also allows registrations
>    from certain well reviewed Experimental RFCs, or, for example,
>    corrections to registry errors from Informational RFCs, with IETF
>    review and consensus.
> 
> END
> 
> Barry