Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2FD9C1A90AE for ; Mon, 1 Dec 2014 12:47:57 -0800 (PST) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -1.911 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.911 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_RP_MATCHES_RCVD=-0.01] autolearn=ham Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id ejYXQ7CODYMP for ; Mon, 1 Dec 2014 12:47:54 -0800 (PST) Received: from jazz.viagenie.ca (jazz.viagenie.ca [IPv6:2620:0:230:8000::2]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id A8AF31A90A6 for ; Mon, 1 Dec 2014 12:47:54 -0800 (PST) Received: from h226.viagenie.ca (h226.viagenie.ca [206.123.31.226]) by jazz.viagenie.ca (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id DA435403C2; Mon, 1 Dec 2014 15:47:53 -0500 (EST) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 8.1 \(1993\)) From: Marc Blanchet In-Reply-To: Date: Mon, 1 Dec 2014 15:47:52 -0500 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Message-Id: <04873214-2365-4CE5-8C90-7F97B40F30DC@viagenie.ca> References: To: Suresh Krishnan X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.1993) Archived-At: http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/y_8suvDSehzXjfPL7biAYXnPDOA Cc: "draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap.all@tools.ietf.org" , General Area Review Team Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 01 Dec 2014 20:47:57 -0000 > Le 2014-10-28 =C3=A0 23:31, Suresh Krishnan = a =C3=A9crit : >=20 > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). >=20 > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >=20 > Document: draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan > Review Date: 2013/10/28 > IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30 >=20 >=20 > Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as Proposed=20 > Standard, but I do have a comment you may wish to consider. >=20 > * Sections 5.2 and 5.3 >=20 > -> The document uses some non-documentation addresses (AFAIK) in some = of=20 > the examples. e.g. 28.2.0.0/16 for an IPv4 prefix and 2600::/16 for an=20= > IPv6 prefix. Is it possible to rewrite these examples using reserved=20= > documentation addresses? Strangely enough, idnits does not seem to = catch=20 > them either. Hello, I agree in principle. In fact, the document actually _uses_ = documentation prefix in both IPv4 and IPv6 examples. However, as one = knows, the documentation prefixes are limited in size and therefore the = examples would be incomplete if using only documentation prefixes. So = additional examples are provided. I thought hard to find a way to = illustrate all examples using only documentation prefix and came to the = conclusion that it is not appropriate and may in fact make the spec less = clear. So I=E2=80=99m ignoring this comment (sorry Suresh) for -11.=20 Marc.=20 >=20 > Thanks > Suresh >=20 >=20 >=20