[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-curdle-dnskey-eddsa-02

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Sun, 11 December 2016 11:21 UTC

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From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-curdle-dnskey-eddsa-02

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Nits

Summary: Ready, with nits

I am not an expert in this field, but the document seems to meet its
goals, it's clear and precise

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. Section 4: s/Section5.1.7/Sections 5.1.7/

2. Section 8: 'The following entry has been added to
   the registry' - I may be wrong, but the section seems to define two
new entries in the registry rather than one

[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-curdle-dnskey-edds… Dan Romascanu
Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-curdle-dnskey-… Daniel Migault