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Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com> Thu, 01 December 2016 20:16 UTC

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From: Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com>
To: Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com>
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Thank you, Dino. Good, I understand it now.

Lucy

-----Original Message-----
From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farinacci@gmail.com] 
Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:53 PM
To: Lucy yong
Cc: Jari Arkko; draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; Stig Venaas
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05

> OK, forget my suggestion. I have a difficulty to parse this sentence 
> (second part)
> 
>  It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end 
> replication and identifies the  receiver ETR that needs to be notified 
> should the root of the  distribution tree move to another site.
> 
> Lucy

First off, let’s include the entire paragraph:

   Knowledge of the receiver ETR's RLOC address is also essential to the
   control plane of the root ITR.  It determines the downstream
   destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the
   receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root of the
   distribution tree move to another site.

How about we change to this:

   Knowledge of the receiver ETR's RLOC address is also essential to the
   control plane of the root ITR.  The RLOC address determines the downstream
   destination for unicast head-end replication and identifies the
   receiver ETR that needs to be notified should the root ITR of the
   distribution tree move to another site. The root ITR can change when the
   source EID is roaming to another LISP site.

Dino

> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dino Farinacci [mailto:farinacci@gmail.com]
> Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 1:45 PM
> To: Lucy yong
> Cc: Jari Arkko; 
> draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp@tools.ietf.org; General Area 
> Review Team; Stig Venaas
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: 
> draft-ietf-pim-join-attributes-for-lisp-05
> 
> 
>> Could you make this sentence more readable?
>> 
>>  It determines the downstream destination for unicast head-end 
>> replication and identifies the  receiver ETR that needs to be 
>> notified should the root of the  distribution tree move to another site.
>> 
>> "should be", "moving”?
> 
> I do not understand what you are suggesting. Write more words please.
> 
> Dino
> 
>

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