Re: [Gen-art] [tsvwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-26

Bob Briscoe <ietf@bobbriscoe.net> Sun, 24 July 2022 20:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [tsvwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-26
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Ines,

Thank you for the review. See [BB]

On 21/07/2022 23:56, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
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> Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-ecn-l4s-id-26
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2022-07-21
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-07-21
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The document, with experimental intended status, defines the protocol to be
> used for a new network service called low latency, low loss and scalable
> throughput (L4S). L4S uses an Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) scheme at
> the IP layer. The document is well written, includes also discussion about open
> issues/questions to be addressed through experimentation
>
> Major issues: None
>
> Minor issues: None
>
> Nits/comments:
> Page 17: " ..The members of the Transport Working group are not aware of any...
> " it would be nice to add something like: "At the time of writing this
> specification, the members of the Transport Working group are not aware.."

[BB] We've added to the local editor's copy. Thank you again.



Bob

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> Thanks for this document,
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> Ines.
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>

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