Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06

Ben Niven-Jenkins <ben@velocix.com> Fri, 22 June 2012 17:37 UTC

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Wassim,

Thanks for the review, please see below:

On 19/06/2012 19:44, "Wassim Haddad" <wassim.haddad@ericsson.com> wrote:

>I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
>
>Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may
>receive.
>
>Document:  draft-ietf-cdni-problem-statement-06
>Reviewer: Wassim Haddad
>Review Date: 2012-06-19
>IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-06
>IESG Telechat date: 2012-06-21
>
>Summary: This draft is ready for publication as informational standard
>but one (helpful) addition is suggested.
>
>Major issues: None
>
>Minor issues: 
>
>- Sectiom 1.1: suggest defining "Quality of Experience" (mentioned 4
>times in the document)

In my working copy, I have added the following to the terminology section:

   Quality of Experience (QoE): As defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6390]

(Thanks Benoit for the pointer)

Ben