[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-par-08

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 06 June 2021 23:53 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team
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Document: draft-ietf-oauth-par-08

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-06-06
IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-08
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], Sec 1.1, "because the the request "---->"because the request "

Best Regards,
Meral Shirazipour