[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03

Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 03 April 2018 02:36 UTC

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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready

Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03

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Document: draft-ietf-stir-rph-03.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2018-04-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-06
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19

Summary: Ready
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Comments:
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This is a well written draft and I have no technical comments.

The draft says it extends RFC8225. Some people would say that needs
an Updates: 8225 header.

Nits:
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8.1.  Normative References

   [I-D.ietf-stir-passport]
              Wendt, C. and J. Peterson, "Personal Assertion Token
              (PASSporT)", February 2017.

Is now RFC8225.

   [I-D.ietf-stir-rfc4474bis]
              Peterson, J., Jennings, C., Rescorla, E., and C. Wendt,
              "Authenticated Identity Management in the Session
              Initiation Protocol (SIP)", February 2017.

Is now RFC8224.