[Gen-art] Fwd: review of draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05.txt

Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> Mon, 03 October 2016 20:31 UTC

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Dear RFC Editor,

The following draft is currently in IETF Last Call:
     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-murchison-nntp-compress-05

We received a review from The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART), asking 
to contact you for guidelines about the use of non ASCII characters in 
Authors' Addresses.

Currently, in the draft:

1.3.  Authors' Note

    Please write the first letter of "Elie" and the penultimate letter of
    "allee" with an acute accent wherever possible -- they are
    respectively U+00C9 ("&#201;" in XML) and U+00E9 ("&#233;" in XML).
    Also, the letters "ae" in "Baeuerle" should be written as an a-umlaut
    (U+00E4, "&#228;" in XML), and the first letter of "Angel" as well as
    the fifth letter of "Gonzalez" should be written with an acute accent
    (respectively U+00C1 and U+00E1, that is to say "&#193;" and "&#225;"
    in XML).

[...]

Appendix A.  Acknowledgements

    The authors would like to thank the following individuals for
    contributing their ideas and support for writing this specification:
    Mark Adler, Russ Allbery, Michael Baeuerle, Angel Gonzalez, and Brian
    Peterson.

[...]

Authors' Addresses

    Julien Elie
    10 allee Clovis
    Noisy-le-Grand  93160
    France



What should we do when taking into account the remarks from Gen-ART? 
Keep Section 1.3 and the rest of the draft as-is, or change something? 
(I am using rfc2xml.)

Thanks beforehand,

-- 
Julien ÉLIE

« On ne peut jamais être neutre. Le silence est une opinion. »
   (Henri Moret)