Return-Path: X-Original-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: gen-art@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7AEC021F8634 for ; Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:39:04 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -103.577 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-103.577 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[AWL=0.022, BAYES_00=-2.599, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-1, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100] Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id gNe1YemlnHKE for ; Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:39:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mail-yi0-f44.google.com (mail-yi0-f44.google.com [209.85.218.44]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BCD4521F85F1 for ; Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:39:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: by yic13 with SMTP id 13so4584616yic.31 for ; Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:41:45 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:organization:user-agent:mime-version:to :subject:content-type; bh=oLBSyMtp4zMB2VmzgvIq2xBLAUVFp4KOPm0j3RjFbl8=; b=nSo8OwiJDSgV8Nu3oD/kxzjXm99+IosDMgBHLz1UVXfctk6e0kCbv3tirkx1xtgj9Y JrW09IhaRNF47V8obaUdu1fIsWN6w1+HjWKCZhsbvVBik4sBUDLLvOPeU+/HO1BEUBbl yjDG3frA/HwdehMnzEk6zjuBpVeIPqzuKUjDs= Received: by 10.101.100.6 with SMTP id c6mr5298088anm.1.1317001304882; Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:41:44 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [130.216.38.124] (stf-brian.sfac.auckland.ac.nz. [130.216.38.124]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id 38sm23759420anu.24.2011.09.25.18.41.41 (version=SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Sun, 25 Sep 2011 18:41:44 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: <4E7FD84E.50801@gmail.com> Date: Mon, 26 Sep 2011 14:41:34 +1300 From: Brian E Carpenter Organization: University of Auckland User-Agent: Thunderbird 2.0.0.6 (Windows/20070728) MIME-Version: 1.0 To: draft-ietf-sieve-notify-sip-message.all@tools.ietf.org, General Area Review Team Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="------------050603050808080500010505" Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sieve-notify-sip-message-05.txt X-BeenThere: gen-art@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12 Precedence: list List-Id: "GEN-ART: General Area Review Team" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 26 Sep 2011 01:39:04 -0000 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. --------------050603050808080500010505 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Please see attached review. --------------050603050808080500010505 Content-Type: text/plain; name="draft-ietf-sieve-notify-sip-message-05-carpenter.txt" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 Content-Disposition: attachment; filename="draft-ietf-sieve-notify-sip-message-05-carpenter.txt" SSBhbSB0aGUgYXNzaWduZWQgR2VuLUFSVCByZXZpZXdlciBmb3IgdGhpcyBkcmFmdC4gRm9y IGJhY2tncm91bmQgb24NCkdlbi1BUlQsIHBsZWFzZSBzZWUgdGhlIEZBUSBhdA0KPGh0dHA6 Ly93aWtpLnRvb2xzLmlldGYub3JnL2FyZWEvZ2VuL3RyYWMvd2lraS9HZW5BcnRmYXE+Lg0K DQpQbGVhc2UgcmVzb2x2ZSB0aGVzZSBjb21tZW50cyBhbG9uZyB3aXRoIGFueSBvdGhlciBM YXN0IENhbGwgY29tbWVudHMNCnlvdSBtYXkgcmVjZWl2ZS4NCg0KRG9jdW1lbnQ6IGRyYWZ0 LWlldGYtc2lldmUtbm90aWZ5LXNpcC1tZXNzYWdlLTA1LnR4dA0KUmV2aWV3ZXI6IEJyaWFu IENhcnBlbnRlcg0KUmV2aWV3IERhdGU6IDIwMTEtMDktMjYNCklFVEYgTEMgRW5kIERhdGU6 IDIwMTEtMTAtMDUNCklFU0cgVGVsZWNoYXQgZGF0ZTogDQoNClN1bW1hcnk6ICBBbG1vc3Qg UmVhZHkNCi0tLS0tLS0tDQoNCk1pbm9yIGlzc3VlOiANCi0tLS0tLS0tLS0tLQ0KDQpJIHdh cyBicmllZmx5IGNvbmZ1c2VkIGJ5IFNlY3Rpb24gMi40LiAoTm90aWZ5IHRhZyAiOmltcG9y dGFuY2UiKQ0KDQpJdCBvbmx5IG1lbnRpb25zIHRocmVlIHBvc3NpYmxlIHZhbHVlcyBvZiAi UHJpb3JpdHkiIGJ1dCBSRkMgMzI2MQ0KbWVudGlvbnMgZm91ciAodGhlIGV4dHJhIG9uZSBp cyAiZW1lcmdlbmN5IikgYW5kIHN0YXRlcyB0aGF0DQoiYWRkaXRpb25hbCB2YWx1ZXMgY2Fu IGJlIGRlZmluZWQgZWxzZXdoZXJlLiIgSSB0aGluayBpdCBzaG91bGQgYmUNCm5vdGVkIHRo YXQgdGhlIDppbXBvcnRhbmNlIHRhZyBjYW4gb25seSBleHByZXNzIGEgc3Vic2V0IG9mIHRo ZSBTSVAgDQpQcmlvcml0eSBoZWFkZXIgc2VtYW50aWNzLCBhbmQgZG9lcyBub3QgcHJvdmlk ZSBhIHNlcGFyYXRlIGNhdGVnb3J5DQpmb3IgIndoZW4gbGlmZSwgbGltYiwgb3IgcHJvcGVy dHkgYXJlIGluIGltbWluZW50IGRhbmdlciIgW1JGQzMyNjFdLg0KDQpJIHJlYWxpc2UgdGhh dCB0aGUgZGlyZWN0aW9uIG9mIHRyYW5zbGF0aW9uIGlzIFNpZXZlIC0tPiBTSVANCmJ1dCBv bmUgdGVuZHMgdG8gZXhwZWN0IHN5bW1ldHJ5LiANCg== --------------050603050808080500010505--