Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology-related WG
Keith Moore <moore@network-heretics.com> Mon, 15 February 2021 18:13 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology-related WG
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[this is an actual review of the draft charter text] Please don't cite "master/slave" as an example that might have an effect on inclusivity, because at least "master" is extremely dubious. (I don't object to using the world "slave" as an example.) "blacklist" might not be a great example either, especially given the historical association of that term with censorship and oppression of views in Hollywood and elsewhere. Censoring the term blacklist in order to promote censorship would seem ironic at best. I don't think this WG should be trying to reinterpret existing words in its deliberations, because IETF participants are not language experts. Instead, it should rely on well-accepted definitions by multiple lexicographers or other researchers who try to accurately document existing usage rather than change the meanings of terms to promote a political agenda. But I do think it's okay to realize that times change and word preferences change with the times. I appreciate that the name and title of the WG don't mention inclusivity or diversity, so maybe there's less risk of this group being tagged as the "diversity" working group and having its agenda expanded far beyond the claimed focus of this effort. I would like to see a milestone for completion around October 2021. Keith On 2/11/21 3:39 PM, Sean Turner wrote: > Effective Terminology in IETF Documents (TERM) > ---- > > The mission of the IETF as specified in BCP 95 is to produce high quality, relevant technical documents that influence the way people design, use, and manage the Internet. As RFC 7322 explains, "The ultimate goal of the RFC publication process is to produce documents that are readable, clear, consistent, and reasonably uniform." RFCs and Internet-drafts are most effective when they use terminology that is clear, precise, and widely accessible to readers from varying backgrounds and cultures. > > In the years leading up to the chartering of this working group, there has been discussion in the IETF, in other standards organizations, and in the technology industry about the use of certain terms (such as “master/slave” and “blacklist/whitelist”) in technical documentation and whether those and other terms have effects on inclusivity. While opinions vary among IETF participants about this topic, there is general agreement that the IETF community would benefit from informational recommendations about using effective and inclusive terminology in IETF documents. > > The TERM working group is therefore chartered to produce an Informational RFC containing recommendations on terminology to use in technical work produced by the IETF. > > Milestones: > > July 2021: Adopt draft providing informational terminology recommendations
- [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology-rel… Sean Turner
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Bron Gondwana
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Lars Eggert
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Vittorio Bertola
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Rodney W. Grimes
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… John Levine
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… S Moonesamy
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Vittorio Bertola
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mark Nottingham
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mark Nottingham
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mark Nottingham
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Christian Huitema
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Christian Huitema
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… John Levine
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Christian Huitema
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Rodney W. Grimes
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… S Moonesamy
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Bob Hinden
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Jay Daley
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Jay Daley
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Bron Gondwana
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mark Nottingham
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… S Moonesamy
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Rob Wilton (rwilton)
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Livingood, Jason
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Bob Hinden
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Alissa Cooper
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Jay Daley
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… S Moonesamy
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Martin Thomson
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Jay Daley
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Jay Daley
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Lars Eggert
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Lars Eggert
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Francesca Palombini
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Francesca Palombini
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Pete Resnick
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Francesca Palombini
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Pete Resnick
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Lars Eggert
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Bron Gondwana
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [Gendispatch] draft charter text: terminology… Eliot Lear
- [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter tex… Sean Turner
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Eric Rescorla
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Livingood, Jason
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Bill Woodcock
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Bron Gondwana
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Fernando Gont
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Bob Hinden
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Keith Moore
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised (was: Re: draft charter… Niels ten Oever
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Brian E Carpenter
- [Gendispatch] New List (Was: revised) Pete Resnick
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Tony Rutkowski
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Mallory Knodel
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Pete Resnick
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Dan Harkins
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Nico Williams
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Phillip Hallam-Baker
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Salz, Rich
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Nico Williams
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised STARK, BARBARA H
- Re: [Gendispatch] revised Nico Williams