Re: [Gendispatch] I-D Action: draft-rsalz-2028bis-00.txt

"Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com> Thu, 09 September 2021 13:04 UTC

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From: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>
To: Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org>
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I am happy to take your suggested text as a replacement for 4.7, thanks. I want to retain the sentence about consulting, however.

Will that address all your concerns?  https://github.com/richsalz/draft-ietf-rfc2028bis/pull/4

Thanks for the feedback!