[Geojson] Review of draft-ietf-geojson-text-sequence-03

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 23 January 2017 18:53 UTC

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Subject: [Geojson] Review of draft-ietf-geojson-text-sequence-03

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-geojson-text-sequence-03
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-01-23
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-02

Summary: Ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but with nits
that should be addressed before proceeding

The last call was issued indicating this draft is being considered for
Proposed Standard (which is appropriate). The draft itself has
"Informational" in its header block. That should be "Standards Track"
instead.

The Abstract contains the words "proposed standard". Please edit that
away. You want the flexibility in the future to change the status of
the RFC this will become without having to issue a new RFC editing the
text. I suggest replacing "A proposed standard" with "This document
defines a format"

In the introduction, you say "possibly infinite". I think you mean
"arbitrarily large".

[Geojson] Review of draft-ietf-geojson-text-seque… Robert Sparks