[Geopriv] draft-ietf-geopriv-uncertainty

[Julian Reschke <[e-mail]>]

Hi there.

I was asked to review the XML namespace registration, and I have  minor 
editorial comments.

<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-geopriv-uncertainty-03#section-8.1> 
defines the XML namespace

   "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:geopriv:conf"

But that namespace name only occurs once more in the document (in the 
XML schema).

It *ought* to appear in 
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-geopriv-uncertainty-03#section-4.1> 
(where the confidence element is described); alternatively, that section 
could refer to the schema.

Note that 
<http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-geopriv-uncertainty-03#section-6.4> 
has the following example:

>      <pidf:presence
>          xmlns:pidf="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:pidf"
>          xmlns:dm="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:pidf:data-model"
>          xmlns:gp="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:pidf:geopriv10"
>          xmlns:gs="http://www.opengis.net/pidflo/1.0"
>          xmlns:gml="http://www.opengis.net/gml"
>          xmlns:con="urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:pidf:geopriv:conf"
>          entity="pres:[e-mail]">
>        <dm:device id="sg89ab">
>          <pidf:status>
>            <gp:geopriv>
>              <gp:location-info>
>                <gs:Circle srsName="urn:ogc:def:crs:EPSG::4326">
>                  <gml:pos>42.5463 -73.2512</gml:pos>
>                  <gs:radius uom="urn:ogc:def:uom:EPSG::9001">
>                    850.24
>                  </gs:radius>
>                </gs:Circle>
>    <!-- c -->  <con:confidence pdf="normal">67</con:confidence>
>              </gp:location-info>
>              <gp:usage-rules/>
>            </gp:geopriv>
>          </pidf:status>
>          <dm:deviceID>mac:010203040506</dm:deviceID>
>        </dm:device>
>      </pidf:presence>

That example isn't XMLNS-wellformed, as the "con" namespace is undefined 
(and yes, that's why I couldn't find it when looking for uses of the 
newly defined namespace).

Best regards, Julian