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Re: [GROW] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Mon, 10 June 2019 19:29 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [GROW] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
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Brian, thanks for your review. Randy and David, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On May 4, 2019, at 12:52 AM, Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2019-05-04
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-13
> IESG Telechat date:  
> 
> Summary: Ready, but...
> --------
> 
> Minor issues:
> -------------
> 
> This seems *much* more like a BCP than a standard.
> 
> In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction,
> it might be helpful to add something like:
>  This document recommends specific action items to limit future inconsistency.
> 
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