Re: [hiprg] draft-irtf-hip-experiment-10 review

"Henderson, Thomas R" <thomas.r.henderson@boeing.com> Tue, 01 March 2011 05:31 UTC

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From: "Henderson, Thomas R" <thomas.r.henderson@boeing.com>
To: 'Ari Keranen' <ari.keranen@nomadiclab.com>, "hiprg@irtf.org" <hiprg@irtf.org>
Date: Mon, 28 Feb 2011 21:32:34 -0800
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ari Keranen [mailto:ari.keranen@nomadiclab.com]
> Sent: Monday, February 28, 2011 8:56 AM
> To: hiprg@irtf.org
> Cc: Henderson, Thomas R
> Subject: draft-irtf-hip-experiment-10 review
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I finally managed to have look at the experiment report doc. Here's
> some comments and nits:
> 
> 
> 1.1.  What is HIP?
> 
> Could mention that Standards Track work has been started (in the end of
> the section).
> 
> 
> 1.2.  Scope
> 
>  During the timeframe of this report (2004-09),
> 
> s/09/2011/
> 
> 
> 2.3.8.  Interactions with host firewalls
> 
>    When using HIP over UDP, the host needs to open
>    just port 10500 in practice.
> 
> This seems to imply that inbound unsolicited packets to 10500 would be
> needed, which is not the case as long as ICE is used (except for the
> HIP relay server). I'd rather say something like "the firewall needs to
> allow outbound UDP packets and responses to them".
> 
> 

Ari, thanks for the review.  The reason that the document still says 2009 is that it mainly stopped receiving substantial inputs since that time, so to avoid confusion, I propose to rephrase:  "During the period of time in which the bulk of this report was drafted (2004-2009), ..."

I'll make the other two changes suggested above in the next revision (-11), and I have a few more changes to add that Miika suggested.

I am waiting to receive inputs on the question I posed recently about privacy and identity theft vulnerability of the DH exchange, before revising that section and publishing the -11 version.  Yesterday I posed a question on the crypto-forum research group list (http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/cfrg/current/msg02919.html) and I've received some feedback there.  Pekka also pointed me to the 2004 paper on BLIND, which I'll review again.

- Tom