Re: [Hipsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-19.txt

Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com> Tue, 25 April 2017 13:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Hipsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-19.txt
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Hi,

I have commented out the section numbers.

On 03/28/2017 07:16 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Another comment:
>
> The draft references specific sections in draft-ice-5245bis.
>
> Note that there is some ongoing re-structuring of 5245bis, which means the section numbers may change.
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Hipsec [mailto:hipsec-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Miika Komu
> Sent: 27 March 2017 10:41
> To: hipsec@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Hipsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-19.txt
>
> Hi,
>
> the preliminary version is now published as it is (except I had to change publication the date). The suggestions from Christer are not yet here and will require some time to be fixed.
>
> On 03/27/2017 10:37 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Host Identity Protocol of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Native NAT Traversal Mode for the Host Identity Protocol
>>         Authors         : Ari Keranen
>>                           Jan Melén
>>                           Miika Komu
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-19.txt
>> 	Pages           : 53
>> 	Date            : 2017-03-27
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document specifies a new Network Address Translator (NAT)
>>    traversal mode for the Host Identity Protocol (HIP).  The new mode is
>>    based on the Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) methodology
>>    and UDP encapsulation of data and signaling traffic.  The main
>>    difference from the previously specified modes is the use of HIP
>>    messages for all NAT traversal procedures.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-19
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traver
>> sal-19
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-
>> 19
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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