[Hipsec] Please review -- I-D Action:draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-02.txt

I tried to make the recommended changes.

Please review and comment.

On 02/25/2011 12:30 PM, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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> This draft is a work item of the Host Identity Protocol Working Group of the IETF.
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> 	Title           : Host Identity Protocol Architecture
> 	Author(s)       : R. Moskowitz
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-02.txt
> 	Pages           : 27
> 	Date            : 2011-02-25
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> This memo describes a new namespace, the Host Identity namespace, and
> a new protocol layer, the Host Identity Protocol, between the
> internetworking and transport layers.  Herein are presented the
> basics of the current namespaces, their strengths and weaknesses, and
> how a new namespace will add completeness to them.  The roles of this
> new namespace in the protocols are defined.
>
> This document obsoletes RFC 4423 and addresses the concerns raised by
> the IESG, particularly that of crypto agility.  It incorporates
> lessons learned from the implementations of RFC 5201 and goes further
> to explain how HIP works as a secure signalling channel.
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