Re: [Hipsec] Magnus Westerlund's No Objection on draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-32: (with COMMENT)

Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com> Thu, 30 July 2020 09:29 UTC

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From: Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com>
To: "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Thread-Topic: Magnus Westerlund's No Objection on draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-32: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Hipsec] Magnus Westerlund's No Objection on draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-32: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Magnus,

ti, 2020-07-28 kello 07:44 -0700, Magnus Westerlund via Datatracker
kirjoitti:
> Magnus Westerlund has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-32: No Objection
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> Thanks for resolving and answering my questions.
> 
> I have only one minor comment that I noticed due to that you edit the
> text:
> 
> Section 2:
> "Following [RFC5770] and SDP [RFC3264] ..."
> 
> RFC 3264 is not SDP, it is the "Offer/Answer model with SDP" there is
> a
> significant difference, as SDP base spec is RFC4566.

how about:

SDP related naming conventions [RFC3264]

or just:

[RFC3264]