Re: [Hipsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15.txt

Hi Jeff,

thanks for quick feedback, fixed this in version 16.

On 02/01/2017 06:06 PM, Jeff Ahrenholz wrote:
> Hi Miika,
> It looks good to me. I agree on moving to last call, pending further comments.
>
> Spotted one typo in the new text:
> s/Eeach/each/ local address candidate MUST ...
>
> -Jeff
>
> On 2/1/17, 3:14 AM, "Hipsec on behalf of Miika Komu" <hipsec-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of miika.komu@ericsson.com> wrote:
>
>     Hi,
>
>     as you can see the diff link below, this version includes some minor
>     editorial nits, but also some additional text in this section:
>
>     4.2. Transport Address Candidate Gathering
>
>     The priority and RTO calculation formulas from the ICE specification are
>     repeated here.
>
>     Unless there are further comments, I would suggest moving the draft to
>     last call.
>
>     On 02/01/2017 12:58 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>     >
>     > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>     > This draft is a work item of the Host Identity Protocol of the IETF.
>     >
>     >         Title           : Native NAT Traversal Mode for the Host Identity Protocol
>     >         Authors         : Ari Keranen
>     >                           Jan Melén
>     >                           Miika Komu
>     > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15.txt
>     > 	Pages           : 52
>     > 	Date            : 2017-02-01
>     >
>     > Abstract:
>     >    This document specifies a new Network Address Translator (NAT)
>     >    traversal mode for the Host Identity Protocol (HIP).  The new mode is
>     >    based on the Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE) methodology
>     >    and UDP encapsulation of data and signaling traffic.  The main
>     >    difference from the previously specified modes is the use of HIP
>     >    messages for all NAT traversal procedures.
>     >
>     >
>     > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>     > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/
>     >
>     > There's also a htmlized version available at:
>     > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15
>     >
>     > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>     > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-15
>     >
>     >
>     > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>     > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>     >
>     > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>     > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>     >
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