Re: [Hipsec] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-via-01

[Ari Keränen <[e-mail]>]

Hi David,

On 06/12/2010 06:22 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
> that should be fixed before publication.
> 
> This draft describes the addition of source routing and route tracing
> to HIP.  It is proposed for Experimental status, which seems
> appropriate, especially for source routing.
> 
> The draft's in good shape - idnits 2.12.04 found a few minor nits:
> 
> == You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice
> from 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009.  (See
>  http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/)
> 
> -> Copy the correct boilerplate.
> 
> == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of 
> draft-ietf-hip-bone-04
> 
> == Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of 
> draft-ietf-p2psip-base-07
> 
> -> These are only worth updating if a new version of the draft is
> needed for other reasons.

Thanks for the review! All these nits should be fixed when we run the 
draft through the xml2rfc next time.


Cheers,
Ari