[Hipsec] [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Wed, 16 December 2015 18:35 UTC

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Subject: [Hipsec] [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-hip-rfc5204-bis-06
     Host Identity Protocol (HIP) Rendezvous Extension
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 16-Dec-2015
IETF LC End Date: 28-Dec-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:
     Appendix A states that this document was changed by "Added relaying 
of UPDATE packets to support double jump mobility scenario."  Searching 
the document for the word update, I do not find any such relaying 
description.

Nits/editorial comments: