[Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 08 April 2018 07:32 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 7 - "a new error type  SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED
in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10

[Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip… Roni Even
Re: [Hipsec] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Miika Komu
Re: [Hipsec] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of … Alissa Cooper