[Hipsec] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-via-01
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. This draft describes the addition of source routing and route tracing to HIP. It is proposed for Experimental status, which seems appropriate, especially for source routing. The draft's in good shape - idnits 2.12.04 found a few minor nits: == You're using the IETF Trust Provisions' Section 6.b License Notice from 12 Sep 2009 rather than the newer Notice from 28 Dec 2009. (See http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info/) -> Copy the correct boilerplate. == Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of draft-ietf-hip-bone-04 == Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of draft-ietf-p2psip-base-07 -> These are only worth updating if a new version of the draft is needed for other reasons. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ----------------------------------------------------
- [Hipsec] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-via-01 david.black
- Re: [Hipsec] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hip-via… Ari Keränen