[HOKEY] [hokey] #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.
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Subject: [HOKEY] [hokey] #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section
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#5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.
The first paragraph of section 3 says:
This section investigates the design goals for the HOKEY
architecture. These include reducing the signaling overhead for
re-authentication and early authentication, integrating local
domain name discovery, and improving deployment scalability.
These goals supplement the discussion in [RFC5169].
How should the last sentence be reworked?
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Reporter: gwz@… | Owner: draft-ietf-hokey-arch-design@…
Type: defect | Status: new
Priority: major | Milestone:
Component: arch-design | Version:
Severity: In WG Last Call | Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/hokey/trac/ticket/5>
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