Re: [HOKEY] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-06: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Glen Zorn <glenzorn@gmail.com> Fri, 20 April 2012 08:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [HOKEY] Barry Leiba's Discuss on draft-ietf-hokey-rfc5296bis-06: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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On 04/20/2012 01:05 PM, Barry Leiba wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> You also need to get a correct email address for Yang Shi, or perhaps
> remove him from the author list (you can put him in a "Contributors"
> section or in A.2).  Email to the address in the document is bouncing,
> and this will cause you a problem during AUTH48.  (If you can't fix the
> address and need/want to leave him in the author list, the AD can handle
> this during AUTH48, so it's not a disaster.)

Already moved him to a newly minted Contributors section.

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> And you might want to take a look at A.2 and make sure you think it's
> complete.  I see at least two mailing-list messages where Qin Wu
> acknowledges useful comments from Sebastien, for example.  Up to you, of
> course; I'm just setting a flag.

OK.
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