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Re: [HOKEY] [hokey] #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.

Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> Wed, 28 September 2011 03:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [HOKEY] [hokey] #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.
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Subject: [hokey] #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.


> #5: Rework last sentence in 1st paragraph of section 3.
> 
> The first paragraph of section 3 says:
> 
>    This section investigates the design goals for the HOKEY
>    architecture.  These include reducing the signaling overhead for
>    re-authentication and early authentication, integrating local
>    domain name discovery, and improving deployment scalability.
>    These goals supplement the discussion in [RFC5169].
> 
> How should the last sentence be reworked?

[Qin]: I don't see this is not a major issue. If more clarity is requested,
I suggest to change it into
"
These goals supplement the goal discussion in the section 4 of [RFC5169].
"

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> Reporter:  gwz@…            |       Owner:  draft-ietf-hokey-arch-design@…             
>     Type:  defect           |      Status:  new                                        
> Priority:  major            |   Milestone:                                             
> Component:  arch-design      |     Version:                                             
> Severity:  In WG Last Call  |    Keywords:                                             
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> Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/hokey/trac/ticket/5>
> hokey <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/hokey/>
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