[HOKEY] AD review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 21 November 2011 18:39 UTC

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Subject: [HOKEY] AD review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak
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Hi all,

Here's my review of this. There are a lot of comments,
but quite a few are very nitty or are things where I
probably just need to be told that I don't know enough
about ERP. (Which is true of course:-)

Some are non trivial however, and there are a lot of nits,
so I've put this into the revised-ID-needed state.

Probably best is to handle any easy ones via email and
then setup a skype chat for whatever's left. Let me
know...

Cheers,
S.