Re: [HOKEY] WGLC on draft-ietf-hokey-arch-design

I have read the latest (draft-ietf-hokey-arch-design) version of this
draft and think it is ready for publication. However I have some
additional comments to this draft below:
Section 1, It said
"
whereas in AAK the client interacts with the AAA to discover and
connect to CAPs.
"
[Z]: How to understand "discover"? It seems for AAK, there are
potentially two possible cases.
case 1: the client has already discovered a list of CAPs and negotiate
with the AAA to choose one appropriate CAP from the CAPs list.
case 2: the client only knows a layer-2 identifier as index and then
the client use index to lookup appropirate CAP by interacting with the
AAA. which case is correct?

Section 3.1.2 "Minimized User Interaction for authorization"
[Z]: This section seems redundant since the previous section has
already cover this case. Suggest to merge section 3.1.2 into section
3.1.1 or just delete the section 3.1.2.

Section 6:
[Z]:In Quebec meeting, the case where multiple servers are located in
the same domain has been
well discussed. I am thinking if this case should be taken into
account in this section or leave
this case out of scope of hokey architecture?

On Thu, Aug 4, 2011 at 7:26 PM, Glen Zorn <gwz@net-zen.net> wrote:
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Best regards,
Zhen