[homenet] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7788 (5113)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 13 September 2017 19:34 UTC

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Date: Wed, 13 Sep 2017 12:34:37 -0700
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Subject: [homenet] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7788 (5113)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7788,
"Home Networking Control Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5113

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Denis Ovsienko <denis@ovsienko.info>

Section: 10

Original Text
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10.2.2.  DHCPv6-Data TLV

    0                   1                   2                   3
    0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
   |    Type: DHCPv6-Data (37)     |          Length: > 0          |
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

[...]

10.2.3.  DHCPv4-Data TLV

    0                   1                   2                   3
    0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
   |     Type: DHCPv4-Data (38)    |          Length: > 0          |
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+


Corrected Text
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10.2.2.  DHCPv6-Data TLV

    0                   1                   2                   3
    0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
   |    Type: DHCPv6-Data (38)     |          Length: > 0          |
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

[...]

10.2.3.  DHCPv4-Data TLV

    0                   1                   2                   3
    0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
   |     Type: DHCPv4-Data (37)    |          Length: > 0          |
   +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+


Notes
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Section 13 (IANA Considerations) of the document says:

      37: DHCPv4-Data

      38: DHCPv6-Data

Those code points from Section 13 are in the "HNCP TLV Types" IANA registry as well as in the current source code of shncpd and tcpdump. The code points shown in Sections 10.2.2 and 10.2.3 were likely swapped by mistake.

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RFC7788 (draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-10)
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Title               : Home Networking Control Protocol
Publication Date    : April 2016
Author(s)           : M. Stenberg, S. Barth, P. Pfister
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Home Networking
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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