[homenet] Alia Atlas' Yes on draft-ietf-homenet-dncp-11: (with COMMENT)

["Alia Atlas" <[e-mail]>]

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COMMENT:
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Thank you very much for addressing my previous Discuss points and
comments.  
I understand that version -11 will handle the most recent concerns, as
shown in 
the github diff.

I've also read this draft too many times at this point to be certain that
I've picked up all the points of
unclarity.  I've requested another Routing Directorate review, from a new
reviewer, so I may be modifying
my ballot again before the telechat on Thursday.

6) Please define H(...) in terminology, since Sec 4 uses it before it is
defined in 
Section 7.