Re: [homenet] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-15.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 14 May 2021 15:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [homenet] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-homenet-front-end-naming-delegation-15.txt
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Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
    > Please find the new version that is considering the discussions of the
    > mailing list as well as comments received from Med.

Daniel, I was just proofreading, and you'll see a pull request "typos"

1. reading at the beginning, I didn't recall if we had concluded that we were
   going to mandate the AXFR to be XoT (AXFR over TLS) or not.
   We later reference [I-D.ietf-dprive-xfr-over-tls], but not section 4.5.1.
   Is it enough to say it in section 5.1?

2. What if the zone template provided by the DM has to change.
   (Because, for instance, the distribution server NS records change).
   Is the template retrieve each time the zone is signed?
   Once? (And never again?...)
   Based upon some TTL?

3. Section 4.6, we say "SHOULD" on TLS, but in which case, what exception are we
   thinking?  I guess we three will have to do another SHOULD/MUST audit.
   Noting that RECOMMENDED ==> SHOULD.


Section 5 has "YYYY" and "XX"... which feels like maybe we forgot to do some
IANA thing.  Maybe we should omit the placeholders?  What does the WG think?

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