Re: [homenet] I-D Action: draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00.txt

Ralph Droms <rdroms.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 08 July 2016 16:25 UTC

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I took a quick look at draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00, including a diff; seems the only change is to solve the .home problem.  I don't think I quite understand the new text and here's a suggested clarification:

OLD:

  A default value for this TLV MUST be set, although
  the default value of the Domain-Name TLV (Section 10.6) is out of
  scope of this document, and an administrator MAY configure the
  announcement of a Domain-Name TLV for the network.

NEW:

  The administrator MUST configure the announcement of a network-wide
  zone suffix through the Domain-Name TLV.

As far as I can tell, draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00 does not address errata 4718.  While this errata has not yet been verified, in my opinion *something* has to be done to correct the text around "Multicast DNS Proxy".  If "Multicast DNS Proxy" is intended to refer to "Hybrid Proxy" in draft-ietf-dnssd-hybrid-03, the appropriate normative reference will constitute a downref in draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00.

- Ralph

> On Jul 8, 2016, at 10:20 AM 7/8/16, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Home Networking of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : Home Networking Control Protocol
>        Authors         : Markus Stenberg
>                          Steven Barth
>                          Pierre Pfister
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00.txt
> 	Pages           : 38
> 	Date            : 2016-07-08
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the Home Networking Control Protocol (HNCP),
>   an extensible configuration protocol, and a set of requirements for
>   home network devices.  HNCP is described as a profile of and
>   extension to the Distributed Node Consensus Protocol (DNCP).  HNCP
>   enables discovery of network borders, automated configuration of
>   addresses, name resolution, service discovery, and the use of any
>   routing protocol that supports routing based on both the source and
>   destination address.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-homenet-hncp-bis-00
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