[homenet] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 10 May 2018 01:45 UTC
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Subject: [homenet] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-homenet-babel-profile/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Some very minor comments: Substantive Comments §2.1, REQ5: I agree with Benjamin Kaduk that " MUST use metrics that are of a similar magnitude" is a bit vague to be used with a MUST. Editorial Comments: §1.1: Please consider using the 8174 boilerplate. There is at least one instance of a lower case keyword. §2.2 and others: I find the term "non-requirements" confusing here. Please consider "Optional Requirements". §3, first paragraph: "separates between configuration, which is done by HNCP, and routing, which is done by Babel": The word "between" does not belong.
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