Re: [HR-rt] Additional preambular text to use when doing HR reviews

Niels ten Oever <mail@nielstenoever.net> Mon, 01 October 2018 11:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [HR-rt] Additional preambular text to use when doing HR reviews
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I made the text a bit more positive:


Human Rights reviews are developed by a group of individuals in the IRTF
and IETF. They work together to encourage each other to do these
detailed reviews as contributions to the IETF open review process. Human
Rights reviews are individual contributions. The authors hope that the
comments will be taken into consideration by the draft authors, groups
and IESG.

Hope this works.

Cheers,

Niels

On 09/22/2018 09:39 AM, Mallory Knodel wrote:
> Hi folks,
> 
> Keeping the bits about RFC8280 and such, these three sentences should be
> added to the preamble when sending HR reviews to authors:
> 
>> HR reviews are developed by a group of individuals who do not
>> represent an organization in the IRTF or IETF, however they work
>> together to encourage each other to do these detailed reviews as
>> contributions to the IETF open review process. They are individual
>> contributions. The author hopes that the comments will be taken into
>> consideration by the draft authors, groups and IESG.
> 
> Thanks,
> -Mallory
> 

-- 
Niels ten Oever
Researcher and PhD Candidate
Datactive Research Group
University of Amsterdam

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