Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04.txt
Corinne Cath <corinnecath@gmail.com> Tue, 10 March 2020 14:56 UTC
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Subject: Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04.txt
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Hi Stéphane et al, Great work! I did a review of the document, some thoughts below: - I would rewrite the introduction, instead of starting with hard to parse (even for fellow academics) high-level academic concepts (like socio-technical ordering and epistemic community). Why not start with a couple of examples of concrete technology discussions in the IETF and then draw the connection to freedom of assembly? The ongoing discussion about DNS encryption (both the pros in terms of privacy and cons in terms of consolidation) being one example. - Same for the methodology - maybe it is necessary to say a couple of words about how process tracing works? In my own PhD thesis, I try to always draw parallels between my methods and methods used in the IETF to highlight both similarities and differences. For instance, could you draw a parallel between process tracing and Internet measurement? That way the text will speak more to its intended audience in the IETF/IRTF. - The use of the word "significant" in the methodology reads a bit confusing, as it implies a quant approach while you used a mostly qual approach. - This needs a citation: "Freedom of association and assembly refers both to the individual right to join or leave a group and to the collective right of a group to engage in a collective group and to organize itself. The draft makes for a good read but I wonder what you want people to gain from it because I think for this to be more actionable to IETF engineers it would make more sense to draw further connections to ongoing conversations. Hope this is helpful! Kind regards, -- Corinne Cath - Speth Ph.D. Candidate, Oxford Internet Institute & Alan Turing Institute Web: www.oii.ox.ac.uk/people/corinne-cath Email: ccath@turing.ac.uk & corinnecath@gmail.com Twitter: @C_CS On Mon, Mar 9, 2020 at 4:29 AM Stéphane Couture <listes@stephcouture.info> wrote: > Hi all, > > Just a quick notice. I quickly re-submitted a new revision of the draft, > because it was expired and the deadline for draft submission is tomorrow. > This one is only with minor revisions though. I'll try to come up with more > before IETF. > > Best, > > Stéphane Couture > > Le dim. 8 mars 2020 à 21:13, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> a écrit : > >> >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> This draft is a work item of the Human Rights Protocol Considerations RG >> of the IRTF. >> >> Title : Freedom of Association on the Internet >> Authors : Niels ten Oever >> Gisela Perez de Acha >> Stéphane Couture >> Joseph Lorenzo Hall >> Filename : draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04.txt >> Pages : 25 >> Date : 2020-03-08 >> >> Abstract: >> This document discuss the relationships between the Internet >> architecture and the ability of people to exercise their right to >> freedom of assembly and association online. The Internet >> increasingly mediates our lives, our relationships and our ability to >> exercise our human rights. As a forum, it provides a global public >> space despite being built on predominantly private infrastructure. >> Since Internet protocols play a central role in the management, >> development and use of the Internet, the relation between protocols >> and the aforementioned rights should be analyzed and any adverse >> impacts should be mitigated. >> >> >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-irtf-hrpc-association/ >> >> There are also htmlized versions available at: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04 >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04 >> >> A diff from the previous version is available at: >> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04 >> >> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >> submission >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >> >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> hrpc mailing list >> hrpc@irtf.org >> https://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/hrpc >> > _______________________________________________ > hrpc mailing list > hrpc@irtf.org > https://www.irtf.org/mailman/listinfo/hrpc > -- Corinne Cath - Speth Ph.D. Candidate, Oxford Internet Institute & Alan Turing Institute Web: www.oii.ox.ac.uk/people/corinne-cath Email: ccath@turing.ac.uk & corinnecath@gmail.com Twitter: @C_CS
- [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-association-04… internet-drafts
- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-associatio… Stéphane Couture
- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-associatio… Corinne Cath
- Re: [hrpc] I-D Action: draft-irtf-hrpc-associatio… Stéphane Couture