Re: [hrpc] Comment on draft-irtf-hrpc-political-03

Niels ten Oever <mail@nielstenoever.net> Tue, 16 July 2019 08:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [hrpc] Comment on draft-irtf-hrpc-political-03
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Hi SM,

On 7/16/19 10:00 AM, S Moonesamy wrote:
> Hi Niels,
> 
> Section 10 of draft-irtf-hrpc-political-03 describes HRPC as a "working group".  That is not aligned with the charter [1].
> 

This was in the following sentence, right? : 

'The discussion list for the IRTF Human Rights Protocol Considerations working group is located at the e-mail address hrpc@ietf.org' 

Fixed in the following version: s/Working Group/Research Group !

> I noticed the following from one the documents which the draft references: " A draft standard under development by the group contains "a proposal for guidelines for human rights considerations ..."  

Which document is this from?

I thought that this group was producing research documents instead of standards.
> 

This is true. 

Best,

Niels

> Regards,
> S. Moonesamy
> 
> 1. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-irtf-hrpc/
> 

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Niels ten Oever
Researcher and PhD Candidate
DATACTIVE Research Group
University of Amsterdam

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