Re: [http-auth] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpauth-extension-08: (with COMMENT)
大岩寛 <y.oiwa@aist.go.jp> Sat, 03 September 2016 04:07 UTC
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From: 大岩寛 <y.oiwa@aist.go.jp>
To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [http-auth] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpauth-extension-08: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you very much. We'll find some rephrase/improvement on it.
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Yutaka OIWA, Ph.D. Leader, Cyber Physical Architecture Research Group
Information Technology Research Institute
National Institute of Advanced Industrial Science and Technology (AIST)
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Benoit Claise [mailto:bclaise@cisco.com]
> Sent: Thursday, September 1, 2016 10:21 PM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: draft-ietf-httpauth-extension@ietf.org; Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com>;
> httpauth-chairs@ietf.org; ynir.ietf@gmail.com; http-auth@ietf.org;
> rick.casarez@gmail.com
> Subject: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpauth-extension-08:
> (with COMMENT)
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> Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-httpauth-extension-08: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> As mentioned by Rick Casarez in his OPS DIR review:
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> Section 3, paragraph 3:
> Some sentence cleanup is required so that this remains clear. I believe I
> understand what is being said as far as implementation goes but some cleanup
> would make this paragraph more concise.
>