[http-auth] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10: (with COMMENT)
"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 03 November 2016 01:57 UTC
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Subject: [http-auth] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Most of my comments have already been covered by others. I agree with others that the introduction really needs more editing. I share the question about the IPR section. In general, IETF stream documents are not expected to contain licensing language beyond that in the TLP. OTOH, that's about copyright, and this is clearly not--but I wonder why the existing IPR disclosure is not sufficient. If the section is to remain, I suggest making sure this has been reviewed by someone from the IETF trust prior to publication. - Section 16: I don't think 2119 MUSTs are appropriate for IANA instructions. -- I think the registration policy you are looking for is "Specification Required".
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