[http-auth] Peter Yee's Review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06
Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 30 March 2016 13:35 UTC
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Subject: [http-auth] Peter Yee's Review of draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06
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Hi. Peter has reviewed the document, mostly for language (think of it as an early gen-art review). The result is linked here, both as a Word document with markup and as well as a couple of exported formats. Yoav Word format: https://www.dropbox.com/s/xe1oj59vbrrppal/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.docx?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/xe1oj59vbrrppal/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.docx?dl=0> PDF export: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ueayvfiltghc58s/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.pdf?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/ueayvfiltghc58s/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.pdf?dl=0> HTML export: https://www.dropbox.com/s/mygpd01f2kd9147/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.html?dl=0 <https://www.dropbox.com/s/mygpd01f2kd9147/draft-ietf-httpauth-mutual-06.html?dl=0> (apologies for the DropBox prompts to create an account. I did not want to attach 1.5 MB worth of attachments to this message)