Re: [http-state] I-D Action:draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-21.txt

Adam Barth <ietf@adambarth.com> Fri, 18 February 2011 06:43 UTC

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From: Adam Barth <ietf@adambarth.com>
Date: Thu, 17 Feb 2011 22:43:18 -0800
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Subject: Re: [http-state] I-D Action:draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-21.txt
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On Thu, Feb 17, 2011 at 10:32 PM, Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>; wrote:
> On 20.01.2011 09:40, Julian Reschke wrote:
>> On 20.01.2011 00:15, Internet-Drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> directories.
>>> This draft is a work item of the HTTP State Management Mechanism
>>> Working Group of the IETF.
>>>
>>>
>>> Title : HTTP State Management Mechanism
>>> Author(s) : A. Barth
>>> Filename : draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-21.txt
>>> Pages : 43
>>> Date : 2011-01-19
>>> ...
>>
>> Nit: there's an unused reference to RFC 5246, probably caused by a
>> change in draft 20
>> (<http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-20.txt>
>> and
>>
>> <http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-21.txt>).
>>
>>
>> There's also ABNF text that needs to be reformatted due to the width
>> constraints...
>> ...
>
> These problems are still present in draft 22...

Fixed.

> Also note:
>
>  -- The draft header indicates that this document obsoletes RFC2965, but the
>     abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
>
> (<http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-httpstate-cookie-22.txt>)

Is there boilerplate text we should use for that?

Adam