Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-14: (with COMMENT)

[Erik Kline via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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[[ nits ]]

[ section 1 ]
* "requires external device" -> "requires an external device"?

[ section 2.2 ]
* "indicate user agents" -> "indicate to user agents"?

[ section 3.1 ]
* s/sh-list/sf-list/g

[ section 4.3 ]
* "we can remove" -> perhaps another wording that doesn't require "we"

* "unless the opt-in origin has explicitly delegated permission to another
  origin": is this delegation mechanism documented somewhere that should
  be referenced here?

* "is challenging and likely" -> "may be challenging or even"