Re: #462, was: p5: editorial suggestions

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Thu, 20 June 2013 18:41 UTC

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On 2013-06-20 18:52, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> ...
>> So maybe change
>>
>> "The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of [Part4] and only if the result of their evaluation is leading toward a 200 (OK) response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a 304 (Not Modified) response."
>>
>> to
>>
>> "The Range header field is evaluated after evaluating the preconditions of [Part4] and only if the result in absence of the Range header field would be a 200 (OK) response. In other words, Range is ignored when a conditional GET would result in a 304 (Not Modified) response."
>>
>> ?
>
> Think so.
> ...

OK; see <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2299>.

> ...

>>>>> * 4.3 first paragraph re-defines what validator strength is; this should just be a reference to p4.
>>>>
>>>> But then it doesn't seem to say exactly the same thing.
>>>
>>> Well, that's not good, is it?
>>
>> It wouldn't be good, but it probably also wouldn't be something we can change right now.
>> ...

I opened a separate ticket for tracking this one: 
<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/489>.

Best regards, Julian