Part 2: Editorial changes involving "instance of time"

"Peter Occil" <poccil14@gmail.com> Wed, 15 May 2013 01:37 UTC

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As an editorial change I suggest changing Section 7.1.1 of Part 2 in the following ways: 

* In the phrase "a reasonable approximation of the current instance in Coordinated Universal Time", change "instance" to "instant".
* In the sentence "An HTTP-date value represents time as an instance of Coordinated Universal Time (UTC).", change "instance of" to "instant in".

--Peter