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Re: #495 WGLC: p4 editorial nits

Ken Murchison <murch@andrew.cmu.edu> Fri, 13 September 2013 13:32 UTC

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On 09/13/2013 09:14 AM, Julian Reschke wrote:
> On 2013-09-12 16:22, Ken Murchison wrote:
>> Looking over the latest diffs I found a couple of typos:
>>
>> - Sec 3.4, 1st sent" "earlier or equal to" -> "earlier than or equal to"
>>
>> - Sec 3.4, para 5, 1st sent: "resource that resource" -> "resource that"
>>
>> - Sec 3.5, 1st para, 1st sent: "similar the If-Match and
>> If-Unmodified-Since fields" -> "similar to the If-Match and
>> If-Unmodified-Since header fields"
>
> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2379>
>

Hi Julian,

You missed adding "header" in the last change above.

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Kenneth Murchison
Principal Systems Software Engineer
Carnegie Mellon University

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