[Errata Verified] RFC8586 (5704)

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The following errata report has been verified for RFC8586,
"Loop Detection in Content Delivery Networks (CDNs)". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5704

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Status: Verified
Type: Technical

Reported by: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date Reported: 2019-04-25
Verified by: Francesca Palombini (IESG)

Section: 1.2

Original Text
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   This specification uses the Augmented Backus-Naur Form (ABNF)
   notation of [RFC5234] with a list extension, defined in Section 7 of
   [RFC7230], that allows for compact definition of comma-separated
   lists using a '#' operator (similar to how the '*' operator indicates
   repetition).  Additionally, it uses a token (OWS), uri-host, and port
   rules from [RFC7230] and the parameter rule from [RFC7231].

Corrected Text
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   This specification uses the Augmented Backus-Naur Form (ABNF)
   notation of [RFC5234] with a list extension, defined in Section 7 of
   [RFC7230], that allows for compact definition of comma-separated
   lists using a '#' operator (similar to how the '*' operator indicates
   repetition).  Additionally, it uses the token, OWS, uri-host and port
   rules from [RFC7230] and the parameter rule from [RFC7231].

Notes
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The last sentence apparently was mangled during AUTH48. The correct version is from draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-02. "token", "OWS", "uri-host" and "port" are all ABNF rules.

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RFC8586 (draft-ietf-httpbis-cdn-loop-02)
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Title               : Loop Detection in Content Delivery Networks (CDNs)
Publication Date    : April 2019
Author(s)           : S. Ludin, M. Nottingham, N. Sullivan
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : HTTP
Area                : Applications and Real-Time
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG