Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-03.txt

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Mon, 05 December 2016 08:00 UTC

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To: Poul-Henning Kamp <phk@phk.freebsd.dk>, ietf-http-wg@w3.org
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From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
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On 2016-12-02 19:38, Poul-Henning Kamp wrote:
> --------
> In message <148070210225.29664.2630836091018103593.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>om>, internet-drafts@ietf.org writes:
>
> So with my Common-Structure hat on:
>
>
>>        Title           : HTTP Client Hints
>> [...]
>>     Save-Data = sd-token *( OWS ";" OWS [sd-token] )
>>     sd-token = token
>
> Why isn't this list separated by "," like we usually do ?

It's consistent with other client hints which do not use list syntax... 
That said, the prose should state like for the other hints...

> ...

Best regards, Julian