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Re: #495 WGLC: p4 editorial nits

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Sat, 14 September 2013 15:53 UTC

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On 2013-09-13 15:30, Ken Murchison wrote:
> On 09/13/2013 09:14 AM, Julian Reschke wrote:
>> On 2013-09-12 16:22, Ken Murchison wrote:
>>> Looking over the latest diffs I found a couple of typos:
>>>
>>> - Sec 3.4, 1st sent" "earlier or equal to" -> "earlier than or equal to"
>>>
>>> - Sec 3.4, para 5, 1st sent: "resource that resource" -> "resource that"
>>>
>>> - Sec 3.5, 1st para, 1st sent: "similar the If-Match and
>>> If-Unmodified-Since fields" -> "similar to the If-Match and
>>> If-Unmodified-Since header fields"
>>
>> <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2379>
>>
>
> Hi Julian,
>
> You missed adding "header" in the last change above.

See also <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2388> 
(above), plus Roy's latest changes in 
<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2389> and 
<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/2390>.

Best regards, Julian

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