Re: Fwd: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@greenbytes.de> Mon, 22 February 2016 17:50 UTC

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On 2016-02-22 00:43, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> FYI; we got a secdir review of alt-svc, with some editorial issues.
>
>
>> Begin forwarded message:
>>
>> From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
>> Subject: Re: SECDIR review of draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12
>> Date: 22 February 2016 at 10:42:02 AM AEDT
>> To: Chris Lonvick <lonvick.ietf@gmail.com>
>> Cc: "iesg@ietf.org" <iesg@ietf.org>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc.all@tools.ietf.org
>>
>> Hi Chris,
>>
>> Thanks for the review. See:
>>   https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/23d3b09374c077
>> ...


I'm not totally OK with all the edits, for instance we now have 
normative language in notes, and a lowercase "required" has sneaked in.

Will review tomorrow.

Best regards, Julian