Alissa Cooper's Yes on draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12: (with COMMENT)

["Alissa Cooper" <[e-mail]>]

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-alt-svc-12: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Couple of places where the language used was confusing for me:

= Sec 2.4 =

s/it can be used until the alternative connection is established./the
existing connection can be used until the alternative connection is
established./

= Sec 3.1 =

OLD
Unknown parameters MUST be ignored, that is
   the values (alt-value) they appear in MUST be processed as if the
   unknown parameter was not present.

NEW
Unknown parameters MUST be ignored. That is,
   the values (alt-value) in which they appear MUST be processed as if
the
   unknown parameters were not present.